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Batgirl and Robin Chapter 1

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Issue 1: Child's Play

In Gotham City Stephanie Brown (a.k.a Batgirl) is in a diner seating a table by herself. After an exhausting day of fighting crime she found it bests to relax her body and mind.
"Jeez, I'm beat" thought Stephanie Brown to herself. "Who thought kicking evil in the ass could ware a girl out"
"Hi there" says a tall black-haired man with glasses who looked as if he were in his twenties.
"Hi yourself" says Stephanie.
"My name's Andy and we kind of go to school together"
"Sorry, but I don't remember" Stephanie after a nervous chuckle, trying to avoid being impolite.
"Never mind that for now, but I was just gonna ask you if might wanna go out sometime like a study date, not a real date-date"
"Well, my job kinda keeps me busy, but I still gotta get through college, so sure"
"Alright! So what days are you..." Andy is interrupted by a loud car alarm from outside.
"What the hell … oh no?" says Stephanie as she looks out the window with widen eye from surprise.
"Don't worry it's just a car crash. Wait a minute is that..." said Andy.
Outside of the window Stephanie sees Robin (Damian Wayne) holding his sword near a man's neck with a girl at his side. Stephanie then jumps out of her seat.
"Hey, babe, where are you going?" says Andy.
"Uhm... to the restroom. I need to freshen up" says Stephanie as she rushes to the restroom "I see you in class".
"Okay" Andy strangely waves goodbye.

Outside the diner, Robin steps on the man's chest and draws the sword closer to his face.
"Okay scumbag you're going to tell me what I need to know!" says Robin.
"Y-Y-Yes sir" says the man cowardly.
Robin the turns his head when he hears footsteps.
"Robin." says Batgirl as she runs toward him.
"Batgirl... What the hell do you want and why are you here?" say Robin.
"I was enjoying my date and second why are trying to kill this guy and third who's the girl," says Batgirl angrily.
"She was in trouble. The man tied her up in his car and I helped her out and I care less about stupid date," says Robin as he steps to Batgirl.
"Now if you'll excuse me this jackass is gonna tell me what I need to know" as he walks toward the man still on the ground. "Now who work for scumbag?" says Robin as he puts his sword near the man's neck.
"I don't know his name but I know where you can find him. He's a small gang boss who operates downtown Gotham. He wanted me to kidnap the little girl." says the gang member as he cowers under Robin's boot.
"What for?" says Robin.
"Her d-dad. The girl's dad, Beck, used to steal all kinds of stuff, but when got arrested after he got caught during a heist he threatened to rat out the crew out to the feds"
Batgirl and Robin then turn to the little girl "Now. Who are you?" says Robin.
"My name's Amy. Amy Richard" says the girl.
" Amy…sweetie. Do you know why this man was kidnapping you?" says Batgirl.
"My daddy," says Amy in a shy voice. "Some men came to our house saying daddy owed them something. They took my daddy and the next thing I know I was looked in a car with tape over my mouth". "My dad's nothing but a criminal and doesn't care about anyone but himself".
"Join the club" says Batgirl sarcastically.
Robin then pushes the gang member up against a glass window.
"What are you doing? I already everything." said the gang member.
"Tell us exactly where to find him. Now." said Robin angrily snorting.
"Alright. He works in an old abandoned fashion near southern Gotham. I think it called Pat's Palace or something. That's all I know. Please, let me go." says the gang member.
Robin then released his grip on the gang member's shirt letting him fall the ground and ties him up.
"The police will be here any second" says Robin as he walks away from the man and to Batgirl and Amy.
"Okay I got some information from the scumbag. He told he operates in some old fashion shop called Pat's Palace."
"I know that place .I used to go there when I was little" says Batgirl.
"…and still wear a size seven" says Robin.
"Screw you. I'm going there myself." says Batgirl.
"No you aren't. This is my case and I'm going to finish it, Blondie." says Robin.
"I'm coming too." says Amy as she runs toward Robin and Batgirl as they are about the used their grappling devices.
"No. Just stay here and wait for the police." says Robin.
"I can't. Wait if more of the gang guys show up and kidnap me again" yells Amy.
"Robin, she's got a point" says Batgirl calmly.
"Are you kidding, she'll probably just get in the way and get all of us killed." says Robin angrily.
Amy then tugs on Robin's cape. "Please, I do anything you ask, I'll even stay on the roof of the building. Just don't leave me only." says Amy.
"I can't believe this" says Robin he sighs with his hand on his forehead and quickly grapples away. "The girl can come, but she on your watch, Batgirl"
Batgirl then puts Amy on her shoulders and uses her grappling device to reach the top of a building with Robin.
"This is amazing" says Amy as she feels the wind through her long black hair.
"I know it always feels great up here" says Batgirl.
"Will you stop with the nostalgia and get your fat ass over here?" yells Robin from miles away.

30 minutes past while grappling through the sky of Gotham City searching for the clothing building.
"Hey, Fatgirl, you see anything?" says Robin.
"No mini-wheat, I don't" says Batgirl.
"Are you two boyfriend and girlfriend?" asked Amy while on Batgirl's back.
"Gross!!!" yells Batgirl and Robin.
The three then arrived on the roof of the abandoned store, Pat's Palace
"Okay here we're here." says Batgirl as she sets Amy on the roof "Now stay her and we'll be back as soon as we can with your daddy."
"Yes, Ms. Batgirl" says Amy.

Inside of the building filled with clothing Amy's dad is tied up with ropes and duct tape on his mouth while several men with weapons gather outside with the intent to hurt him.
A slightly overweight blonde haired man, Danny Carson, in a blue suit approaches Amy's dad, Beck.
"Hey there, Becky Boy, how you doin'." says Danny while smoking a cigar.
Danny leans into Beck's face while Beck struggles to talk with duct tape on his mouth.
"What was that? Can hear you" says Danny as he slowly peels the tape off Beck's mouth.
"Becky. Becky. Becky. It always amazes me how stupid you can be." says Danny as he blows cigar smoke into Beck's face.
"Let me out of here, lard ass." yells Beck while struggling to get untied from the chair.
Danny swiftly slaps Beck across his face.
"You know…I hate smart mouths and I'm guessing your daughter really hates you right now or forever." says Danny.
"What did you do with Amy, you son of a…" says Beck as Danny pulls out a gun.
"Watch your damn mouth." says Danny "You'll see you're little girl again, if don't tell one stinkin' word to the police."
"Yes, just don't hurt my daughter" said Beck as he wiggles on hand free and grabs a pocket knife from his side.
"Good li'l doggy" Danny walks closer to Beck and attempts to pat his head. Beck stabs Danny in the with knife. Danny kicks Beck to the ground and attempts to clean clean the dripping blood from his hand with a shirt sleeve.
"Boys get in here and teach this little piece of crap what happens when you mess with Danny Carson!" Danny yells loudly.
Danny waits patiently but hears nothing. "Boys…Boys where are you?" says Danny as he goes toward the door.
Danny angrily opens the door "Boys…what the hell are you…"
Danny she's Batgirl and Robin along with his gang member knock out on the ground. "Sorry, your guys are knocked out at the moment but we'll take care of you" says Batgirl with a smirk on here face.
Danny quickly runs back inside the building and goes up to Beck "You send those batfreaks here?"
As Danny is about to pull the trigger on his gun a batarang hits his hand leaving a scratch on his hand and forces the gun to drop to the floor.
Robin then kicks Danny in the gut "Next time you wanna make a clean get away lock the door".
Batgirl then unties Beck "Oh god. Thank you."
Amy then comes in with her arms out and runs to her father "Daddy".
"Oh god, sweetie are you alright?" ask Beck.
"Yes, daddy, I'm okay" says Amy.
"I'm so sorry. I should have never put you in harm's way" says Beck as he hugs Amy tighter.  
"Okay, Big Man, listen up. You leave those two alone or I'll come back and kill you." says Robin as he holds his sword near Danny's head.
"O-Okay" said Danny cowardly.
"I know you're not smart enough to do all of this by yourself. Now, give your boss the message" says Robin as he retracts his blade.
Danny then runs out of the door. Batgirl cuts the ropes retaining Beck.
"Thanks for saving my daddy and me," says Amy.
"That's what we do," says Batgirl. "If those jerks come for you or your family, come look for us".
"Sure. And Robin I have something for you," says Amy. Amy quickly kisses Robin on the cheek.
"See ya" as Amy and her dad walk their way back home. Stephanie looks at Damian with a smirk a her face.
"What are you looking at, Brown?" says Damian.
"Nothing, Damian, just relax I think you two make a great couple." says Stephanie

In a sector a northern Gotham City at an abandoned building Daniel stands before the infamous crime boss, Penguin.
"What the hell happened, Dan?" says Penguin.
"Sir, It wasn't my fault it was that Batgirl and Robin duo." says Dan.
"Guards, please take care of Daniel for me. You've made a big mistake Daniel and it's time for you to pay" says Penguin.
"Mr. Cobblepot, please. I'm sorry" Daniel cried as two large thugs in suits then drag Dan out of the room by his arms.
Later Daniel was screaming and crying "No. Please I'm sorry"
"I can't believe this. Two more problems I have to deal with in Gotham. Sometimes I wonder why I stay in this stinking city. It has too much interference. Well no mater they won't be here for long. Bwakakakakakak" says Penguin
The first of many chapters of Batgirl (Stephanie Brown) and Robin (Damian Wayne).
My original version is at www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/batgirl-and-robin-2011-chapter-1-better-redo/606531/
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Chickfighter's avatar
It's got some cute Damian/Steph moments. Those two characters are so much fun to play off of each other! This episode certainly reads like an intro to something more and leaves lots of unanswered questions. Who is Andy? What's up with the girl's father? How did he involve her?

On a technical side I found it a tad odd that this read like narrative fiction generally but had occasional stage direction and time direction given in more of a script format. Also there were a number of places where a word seemed to be missing or auto-correct filled in the wrong word. I specifically recall Danny saying, "Danny, Danny, Danny..." at one point when I think he meant, "Becky, Becky Becky..." I make loads of errors of this type myself, but probably as a function of my day job duties I'm a bit of a obsessive reflexive proof reader. Sorry. Don't take me wrong. Your narrative voice is good and natural, but you need to proofread, catch as many of these errors as possible and correct them.

I'll look forward to seeing where you take the story. ;)